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Take me away

Posted by Baffledmum on

Take me somewhere far from here

To a place where nobody can interfere

Take me somewhere just you and me

To live our lives without a boundary.

 

Take me somewhere we can’t be found

Break these chains that keep me bound

Take me somewhere we can start a new

Where we can live as one instead of two.

 

Take me somewhere to build a home

So I can hold your hand and freely roam

Take me somewhere we wont have to hide

Then I can finally become your bride.

 

Take me somewhere, take me today

Release me from my cage so we can run away

Take me somewhere to set me free

Where I can love you and you can love me.

 

A man kisses a woman's forehead in a sunlit forest of trees
Photo by João Silas on Unsplash

©2018 Poem by Baffledmum (Suki Matharu)

Published by Baffledmum

I'm a mum to 3 lovely boys who can drive me crazy at times and a pet dog who listens to me more than anyone else in my house! Very happily married and generally settled in life. Love to laugh. Love to write! Love to read! Love to dream...

35 Comments Add yours

  1. Sundaram Chauhan says:
    March 27, 2018 at 2:23 pm

    Very nice… 🤘✌🤘

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 27, 2018 at 2:43 pm

      Thank you… X

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  2. MissteriosoDas says:
    March 27, 2018 at 2:36 pm

    Beautiful 👌 Somewhere far is the best place☺️

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 27, 2018 at 2:43 pm

      Yes it is… X

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      1. MissteriosoDas says:
        March 27, 2018 at 2:54 pm

        ❤️

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  3. Seli says:
    March 27, 2018 at 3:09 pm

    Love it❤❤❤❤

    Liked by 3 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 27, 2018 at 3:24 pm

      Thank you 😊

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  4. Anonymous says:
    March 27, 2018 at 3:15 pm

    So beautiful

    Liked by 3 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 27, 2018 at 3:25 pm

      Too kind… X

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  5. Anonymous says:
    March 27, 2018 at 3:16 pm

    This is too good

    Liked by 3 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 27, 2018 at 3:25 pm

      Ahhh I’m so glad you liked it… X

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  6. tampabyflorence says:
    March 27, 2018 at 3:38 pm

    Beautiful Poem.x

    Liked by 3 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 27, 2018 at 3:49 pm

      Thank you… X

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  7. tampabyflorence says:
    March 27, 2018 at 3:56 pm

    You deserve it..😉

    Liked by 2 people

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  8. overthehillontheyellowbrickroad says:
    March 27, 2018 at 6:36 pm

    Awesome poem. As I read it, I felt it could easily apply to many different stages in my life.

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 27, 2018 at 7:32 pm

      Thank you, I’m glad you liked it… X

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  9. Becoming His Tapestry says:
    March 27, 2018 at 7:49 pm

    beautiful! love it 🙂

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  10. quitahale1 says:
    March 28, 2018 at 3:30 am

    Beautiful poem!

    Liked by 2 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 28, 2018 at 8:10 am

      Thank you… X

      Liked by 1 person

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      1. quitahale1 says:
        March 28, 2018 at 8:12 am

        Ur welcome😘

        Liked by 1 person

  11. Sandy says:
    March 28, 2018 at 12:44 pm

    Beautiful babe … 😘

    Liked by 2 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 28, 2018 at 12:46 pm

      😊

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  12. Intrigue Sui Generis says:
    March 28, 2018 at 1:19 pm

    I loved this poem. Very romantic.

    Liked by 2 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 28, 2018 at 1:25 pm

      Glad you liked it… X

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  13. brightblueballoon says:
    March 28, 2018 at 7:26 pm

    So beautiful:)

    Liked by 2 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 28, 2018 at 7:30 pm

      I’m glad you liked it 😊

      Like

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  14. Chris.Lemos says:
    March 28, 2018 at 10:35 pm

    Heartfelt! Loved it.

    Liked by 2 people

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 28, 2018 at 10:46 pm

      So glad! X

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  15. missy512 says:
    March 30, 2018 at 1:40 pm

    The words, the rhythm, the sentiment…simply captivating! Thank you for sharing your gift of writing and poetry! Have a blessed Good Friday and Resurrection Sunday sister!

    Liked by 1 person

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      March 30, 2018 at 2:31 pm

      That’s so kind of you to say… I appreciate your words they encourage me to write more… X

      Liked by 1 person

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      1. missy512 says:
        March 30, 2018 at 2:39 pm

        I mean them. I know so many agree as well! God bless you and your gift.

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      2. Baffledmum says:
        March 30, 2018 at 2:48 pm

        ❤

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  16. Sahil pahwa says:
    April 15, 2018 at 11:27 am

    Beautiful:)

    Liked by 1 person

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    1. Baffledmum says:
      April 15, 2018 at 11:55 am

      Thank you…

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  17. shoniessky says:
    May 16, 2018 at 7:16 pm

    Truly beautiful!!!

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